Although Xixi is only in the first grade of elementary school, after the spring outing, the spring outing diaries, or the so-called experiences and experiences, which many children hated deeply, followed one after another! Of course, when Li Ruolan communicated with the parents, he still revealed the plan to use this as a foreshadowing and will start asking the children to start writing diaries in the future.
This small two-hundred-word homework after the spring outing is a disaster for many children, such as Lan Xin, Chen Yuxuan, etc., but for Xixi, or families like Wang Leilei and Cao Ruolin, it is a disaster. For the children who started asking them to learn to write a diary early, this is really not a big problem.
Especially Xixi, the little girl who just finished taking a bath is sitting in front of the desk with her cheeks on her back, frowning, but what she is worried about is not the issue of writing about the experience of spring outing…
“Mr. Li said to write 200 words, but, but I think there are so many things to write, I can’t finish it, what should I do?” When Xixi saw her father walking in, she raised her head and couldn’t wait. asked.
Yang Yi smiled slightly, stood beside her desk, looked at her sideways, and asked, “How much do you plan to write?”
Xixi grabbed the pen, turned her head to look at her workbook, thought for a while, then turned her head back in confusion, and said with a small pink mouth: “I don’t know, but, but I think there is There are so many stories to tell, but I don’t know how many to write.”
I want to finish writing all the interesting things and only write 200 words, of course it is impossible!
Yang Yi thought about it and felt that now is a good opportunity for Xixi to make progress.
So, he said with a smile: “Xixi, let’s not write this composition first, take out your diary, and take out a scrap paper.”
Xixi was a little puzzled, but she obediently followed her father’s instructions, buttoned up the workbook, neatly pressed it under another stack of workbooks, then opened the drawer and put her exquisite and beautiful book The diary was carefully removed.
The scratch paper is on the table.
“What do you think, if you were asked to write a diary, how would you write it? What would you write at the beginning?” Yang Yi asked.
The little girl looked at her father in confusion. She looked down at the diary, thought for a while, and replied a little uncertainly: “Write the date and the weather?”
Yang Yi found that he had to be more specific. He smiled and said, “So, think about it, what wonderful things happened when we were on the bus on the way to the spring outing? something happened?”
Why don’t you ask?
Xixi’s eyes lit up all of a sudden, the little girl with a good memory didn’t even have to think about it, she said with a smile on her fingers: “There are many, Baba sent us small steamed buns and delicious soft Sugar, and then Baba also sings with us…”
“Then you can use two lines of words on the scratch paper. On it, write that Dad will send snacks, and write that we will sing and teach our classmates to sing.” Yang Yi said to Xixi.
The little girl obediently followed her father’s instructions. After she wrote two words, she raised her head and looked at her father eagerly: “Baba, I don’t know how to write snacks.”
“Words that I can’t write are still the same as before, first replace them with pinyin, and then look up the dictionary and change them later.”
By doing this, Yang Yi was also teaching Xixi to design a simple outline of a “long story”, so after Xixi finished writing, he leaned down and pointed to the two lines of words written by Xixi, Says: “See these two subheadings? Are they structured like what so-and-so is doing?”
The little girl blinked. It was not easy for her to understand the concept. After thinking for a while, she nodded.
“This is our summary of one thing. Later, when we write the diary in detail, we can expand from these words.” Yang Yi said, “Then add the time when you are writing the teacher’s account of the spring outing experience. , we need to simplify some content, so which of these two content do you think is more exciting? Do you want to keep it?”
Xixi could probably understand what her father meant. She hesitated for a while, pointed to the one behind, and said, “I think, I think singing is more fun.”
“That’s right!” Yang Yi patted Xixi’s little head with a smile, and said, “When we write a diary, it’s like we’re building blocks, think about which pieces we want to write first. content, and then one building block, one building block is put on it.”
“But the teacher asked you to write a composition of only 200 words. At this time, you have to think about how to simplify it, keep the parts that you think are the most interesting, and keep the parts that may not be so important, like dismantling building blocks Remove it piece by piece. In this way, you will know what to write in the last two hundred words!”
Take building blocks as an example. Obviously, there are many images. The little girl understands it.
“Baba, but, what should I do if I still want to write a lot? Because I think a lot of things are fun!” Xixi finally twisted her slender waist on the chair, slightly reluctant. Talk to dad.
“So Dad let you write a diary first!” Yang Yi laughed and said, “Your diary is not limited, you can write as much as you want, and when you finish writing your diary, you will write very well. Satisfied, let’s look back and see how to condense this diary into a two-hundred-word article, so that you will have no regrets.”
“Yes!” Xixi’s eyes lit up, and she gestured with her father with a smile~IndoMTL.com~ Then I want to write a diary, I want to write a lot of things! “
“Okay, you can write your diary first tonight, if you can’t finish it, we will continue tomorrow, and we will see it together tomorrow, how to simplify the 200-word spring tour experience, write it well, okay? ?” Yang Yi looked at the little girl’s happy appearance, and his mood was also very good, and his voice rose a lot.
“Okay!” the little girl responded crisply.
…
On Sunday, when Yang Yi was instructing her daughter to write an essay, she accidentally received a call from Fu Jun.
It is not surprising that Yang Yi received a call from Fu Jun. After all, he and Fu Jun have a very good personal relationship. Usually when he goes to Yangcheng, he will eat with Fu Jun and his family, but this time, Fu Jun It was because of the official business of the Sahara Online Mall to find Yang Yi.
Now Sahara Online Mall is basically on the right track, and Fu Jun rarely calls Yang Yi about work. After all, a mature company has a rich talent pool and a complete corporate structure, so it should be reduced Dependence on Yang Yi!
But this time, it’s about the future development direction of the group company and the online mall, not to mention the management of Sahara Online Mall, even Fu Jun himself can’t grasp the idea.
Therefore, he can only turn to Yang Yi, who has always been far-sighted.
“It’s inconvenient to talk on the phone. Are you free tomorrow? I plan to come to Jiangcheng tomorrow. I’ll discuss it with you and Brother Lan.” Fu Jun’s behavior over the years has become more and more resolute. Yes, however, he still maintained a respect for Yang Yi and asked first.
“Yes, such a big thing, we really need a few shareholders to sit down and talk.” Yang Yi smiled and said, “However, I don’t think you should worry about it, maybe it’s a good thing. !”