~Concluding remarks~
Concluding remarks
Sorry, it took a few days to send 00/It’s because Qingkong was lazy (the time without code words, I’m really happy (*^▽^*))
In December, I wrote a self-summary late at night (in emo), but now I find it inappropriate when I read it out, it’s very low-pressure (ε=(ο｀*))).
First of all, let me talk about some regrets and shortcomings in this book, first of all, the plot structure, just like what I said before, because I was very young at the time, I wanted to think about everything, science fiction, western fantasy, ancient style, fairy tales, epics , Group portraits, and so on, there are too many elements written, and as for the depth of each direction later, it is not enough, the next book must be more restrained.
In addition, some poisonous points have been stepped on a lot, such as the protagonist’s amnesia, re-leveling and so on.
Writing in the middle and late stages is a bit exhausting, like a mobile phone with less than 30% battery power. I don’t have much energy to prepare some big plots, thrilling and ups and downs. After typing 4000 words a day, it seems to be drained.
Ahem, but I’m recovering a bit now.
Although I have asked for leave before, the update pressure is like a vicious black dog guarding the door. Even if I play games, it is difficult to fully immerse myself in it. I always press this matter in my heart, and now I finally let it go. =/~~~~
Very happy, very happy, I can even watch extremely realistic and depressive stories without being depressed (there is a particularly powerful illusion)
In the past two years of writing the book, I have virtually reduced the time and energy of reading other novels, which has caused some panic. For example, I don’t know whether the things I am writing now are still liked by everyone, compared with today’s mainstream How, is it very procrastinating, is it not exciting enough, is it a bit old-fashioned, etc.
Some of the words and phrases used in the description gradually began to repeat. The word deaf-mute is related to deaf-mute. Correction, so the voice gradually distorted, and finally unable to speak.
So, during this period of time, Qingkong will read the books of other authors, especially the works of the current big fire and wind direction, to understand the current environment. I have always thought it was very interesting before, but I didn’t have the energy to experience the game. I will also play.
The style of the next book will probably be a little more relaxed and not too deep. In fact, I am tired of writing in the deep water area at the back. Sometimes I feel not very good. There is always a kind of preaching a feeling of. (This is not a good habit, please don’t learn 00/)
Everyone’s values and outlook on life are derived from their own experience. If you force them to preach and use your own experience to set them, there is a high probability that you will only offend others.
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I have talked a lot about it, but now looking back on the past, in the summer of 2020, I sat in the rented house and wrote the beginning of this story. It really felt dreamy and unreal.
At that time, I had just paid off my debts (because I was sick before), and only the savings of more than 18,000 yuan was left. The epidemic had just come to an end, and I told my supervisor to resign. He mentioned some things that he didn’t like very much, because the promised year-end bonus is gone, the salary during the epidemic has been withheld and not paid, and there are some problems with social security and the like.
I replied no, I just wanted to take the public examination, and said that I would write a novel for fear of being laughed at233
Later, the manager and the proprietress mentioned it, and the personnel personnel quickly settled the salary including the part that was not paid before. In fact, the people in the company are pretty good, except for the occasional stinginess (laughs)
The reason why I don’t keep working is because I know that the prospect of this job is actually quite limited. It is not a high-tech industry with profound accumulation. It is possible to buy a house in a big city. (Bitter)
I can’t see the future, and the pressure of the times is gradually approaching. I always feel that it will be regrettable and uncomfortable if I let this development continue and live a mediocre and busy life.
The serious illness in 2018 was a huge impact and change on my outlook on life. At first, the doctor thought it was a certain type of leukemia, but fortunately it was not, but it was also a blood disease that was difficult to cure. (It’s basically getting better now, don’t worry everyone)
Because my mother died of a blood disease, the family members were very worried, and lying on the hospital bed at that time, people would unconsciously start thinking about many things, such as the imminent death, how to spend the only time in the future wait.
The strange thing is that I was very calm at that time, and I didn’t feel very depressed. There was only a slight sadness. Because the life span is not as good as ordinary people, it may be more rare.
Finally, the cause was found out in Tongji. It was a relatively rare hemolytic anemia. The doctor suggested conservative treatment, that is, taking medicine every day and regular blood transfusion.
Then I stayed at home for half a year, and then came out to work. It is definitely not good to stay at home, not only relatives, but also family members are afraid that I will stay at home all the time, becoming weird and out of touch with society, so even if the salary It doesn’t matter if it’s lower.
Later, just like a normal person, I went to interview for a job. This company is very good because the relationship between people is very weak. Everyone never builds a team, and no one talks about their family affairs at work. They leave immediately after work. There are no meals or forced overtime. (Voluntary overtime is available, because occasionally there will be busy periods, and the company will pay overtime)
Because of the reasons mentioned before, after I left my job, I started the long-awaited writing. The preparation at that time was that if I couldn’t sign a contract within three months, or if there was some improvement, I would continue to look for a job. (Just change your job and find a reason to give yourself a raise, laugh)
It’s really not easy to sign a contract. I tried internal casting, but it failed.
Later, the book was published directly so that all editors could see it, but it still didn’t go well. Generally speaking, there will be an editor with about 20,000 words to send a notice on the site, telling you whether you will sign the contract. If you haven’t, then this book is basically Sent.
Because the time for editing is also limited, they won’t read too much, so the first 10,000 to 20,000 words are life and death, and other people I know in the group also say that it is better to stop the loss in time.
Then maybe I was holding a breath or obsession in my heart, and I didn’t want to just give up, so I continued to write, and applied for a contract when I wrote 100,000 words.
Generally, at this time, the normal signed books have received 1-2 rounds of recommendations, but they still failed to sign, and were told that they did not meet the standards.
I was sad for several days, and I wanted to give up at that time, but some readers still voted for me on time, so I slowly resumed updating and continued to write until I reached 150,000 words.
Applied for a contract again, stayed up late and waited until dawn to receive a reply, but still failed, then I was sad and ate some oatmeal before going to bed, and then woke up at noon, and found another notification came, this is another bright future. village.
Thanks again to the editor-in-chief of the second group, Bei He. He said that he thought it was okay after reading it, so he asked the editor in the group to sign me, and then I also transferred to the editorial group.
150,000 words are signed, which can be said to be very ‘old’ in the same period.
I asked the editor if there was any recommendation. He said that he hadn’t had a PK in the same period, and there will be none later, so he applied to put it on the shelves.
I remember that it was 2100+ collections at that time, the first subscription was 180+, and the subscription ratio was 11:1.
Although I was very nervous, I continued to write with anticipation. The starting point of the meeting was just reformed. The first three months of the new book have a protection period, which means 1500 for full attendance. Not full time.
Fortunately, it got better later, so I kept writing until the Spring Festival at the end of the year, that is, the Spring Festival of 2021. Because the follow-up was good during the period, the editor felt that there was some potential, so I tried to give me a recommendation, and I added a lot of favorites , At this time, the average subscription has slowly come to 1600, and finally it is the level where I can support myself.
Then comes the windy year of 2021. In the middle of the year, the background of the twilight era in the book is gradually revealed, and it slowly enters the climax at the end of the third volume. The reveal of the two crowns and the arrival of the final angel Lorraine, that At the same time, he also gained the support of the three silver lords.
Thank you again for Moshang Youren’s support from the Silver League. At that time, I said that I would add another month to repay, but it’s a pity that Kawen couldn’t finish it later, so I’m very sorry.
Then there is the support of Ye Ling owo, jing, and the two silver leaders. Ye Ling first read the book on Q Read and then contacted me. He is the earliest leader of this book and the prototype of Ye Ling in the book. Very cute little dragon lady. Jing seldom talks in the group, and I don’t know much about it, but she probably likes Lagertes’ story very much, which is also the reason why I wanted to write a happy ending later.
Some of the other dozen leaders have never joined the group, some don’t talk much, and a few are very active. Thank you for your support, which makes me full of fighting spirit. Among them, the one who is the most special and whom I want to thank the most is Ba Yunzi, the earliest supporter of this book.
Because the signing failed, I almost couldn’t write anymore, but every night at 12 o’clock sharp, I could receive recommendation tickets from her and several book friends. Miaorong sos celebrates the rewards of the two book friends of the emperor.
Lying on the bed, looking at the two names on the white screen, and the long list of starting point coins rewards behind, I always remember this scene, I was very excited at that time, the book I wrote was recognized, There is also a reward of tens of dollars, which is unimaginable, because there are not many genuine ones, not to mention the reward of tens of dollars 00/can eat a lot of instant noodles.
Thank you for getting me through the hardest time.
Finally, let me tell you something about the protagonist, Little Lorraine.
Indeed, there was such an aborted previous work, which also failed to sign the contract. It was on the side of Hedgehog Mao, with only 80,000 words, but Lorraine Hill was the original author of this book. Quite a lot.
I like the wind and freedom. This is due to my personal preference. Xiao Luolan has entrusted many beautiful imaginations to the author, and sometimes wonders whether it is too perfect and lacks changes and ups and downs of the plot. But it seems that not all stories have to follow the traditional routine. The novel is the product of pursuing fantasy, so let her be more perfect and dreamy.
In fact, people’s thoughts and ideas are not absolutely pure, and sometimes they even conflict with each other. The thoughts of some villains in the book are also the voice of the heart. Don’t imagine that Qingkong is the kind of absolutely gentle person (laughs)
Kitty was a little accident. In fact, I didn’t expect that Kiti would be so liked. However, when I wrote about the innocent and simple Kty, I really felt a kind of relaxation. Kiti is very dependent on Lorraine. Smart and powerful, this kind of attachment bond is hazy and warm, which makes people yearn for it.
Vimia and Sifnerin were actually two characters at the beginning, but later there were not so many chapters dedicated to Sifnerin, so the two were slowly merged. In fact, Vimiya’s personality is introverted and quiet, while Sifner is more generous and charming.
Brenard has never appeared in the book, and it’s not because she’s forgotten or there are not enough chapters, but because she never thought of her appearing in the beginning. She just explained her appearance and personality, with black hair and black eyes, She has a cold personality. If there is a sequel to this book in the future, there is a high probability that she will appear.
Finally, regarding the ending, someone asked me in the group what the black crown was, and how Lorraine Hill finally returned to the present world.
I wrote this paragraph very hazyly, so I should leave some room for thoughts or fantasies.
The girl with black hair and black eyes is not Lorraine, but her birth was greatly influenced by Lorraine. It can be said that she is the mirror image of Lorraine, because in another dimension, there is no so-called life, and Lorraine is The first life to reach the other shore is like lighting a fire in a piece of dark graphite, causing the world to start burning and changing, and its soul (memory) fragments also become the template for the birth of consciousness.
She has a memory idea similar to Lorraine Hill, but her personality is different. In terms of self-cognition, she regards Lorraine Hill as her twin sister, and she is the one who resurrected Lorraine Hill, And sent back to the present world.
If you take it into the game, it is different types of Lorraine Hill, such as “The Silver-haired Girl in the Forest – Lorraine Hill”, “Miss Karites – Lacey”, “Black Water Lily Society” Chang-Lorraine”The Nun under the Stained Window-Rosile”The Great Witch of Miracles and Stars-Lorraine Hill”The Final Angel-Loraine Hill”The Disillusioned Butterfly of the Feather School-Jia Lan ”Graceful Canary Witch – Lolan”, ‘The Phoenix of Jialan – Lolan’, ‘The Diva of Flame – Ailani’ and so on.
This black-eyed girl under the pitch-black crown is a life of another dimension, and also the will of this world. Because of her existence, the sea of Ajaka is no longer violently turbulent.
She will not leave this world, and she will always sit under the dark crown, overlooking the present world through the sea of Ajaka. She is a ‘god’ of another dimension.
Okay, let’s stop here, maybe in the distant future, there will be new legends born, but that is another completely different new story.
Thank you for your support along the way. The specific style and theme of the new book are still being conceived, and we will meet you in March-April.
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Qingkong will continue to walk on the road of writing, and strive to bring you a wonderful and moving world.
So, see you next book 00/